I seem to have been on a Roman holiday this month. Two novels of the Roman Empire - one good one bad.
Bad first then.
Romanitas is the first of a trilogy following the Emperor Marcus
Novius Faustas from his teens to his eclipse.
The premise of the book and the concept is fantastic. The Roman empire has survived and grown and today encompasses over half of the globe. Competing with it are the Chinese & Japanese empires and conflict is coming with clashes along the wall that stretches through what would be Alaska and
seperates the Romans & Chinese. Add in the problem of a diminishing slave stock and the desire of Marcus to free the slaves which conflicts with the desires of the mercantile elite in Rome and the stage is set. It should be a great story and seems to have all the ingredients.
Except that it is so poorly written the novel fails to deliver at any level. The prose is
aweful and the editing dreadful. So bad that it makes the book difficult to read. Sophie
McDougall also fails to make us feel anything for the main characters. Despite the numerous dangerous situations that we find the three lead figures in we never feel as though they are in any danger of coming to harm.
Needless I will not be following the further adventures of Marcus & co and will not be recommending this book to anyone.
By contrast Ben Kane delivers a real treat with "The Forgotten Legion".

This time we are in the Roman Republic just before the civil wars of
Cesar & Pompey.
Crassus is off to Parthia to meet his fate and we follow the main characters as they build up to joining the ill fated expedition and its consequences.
We are treated to insights into the workings of
gladiator schools and their brief but
possibly glorious life. The brutality of slavery is not overlooked, indeed three of the cast are slaves and their lives laid bare (in the case of the
Fabiola this is an overstatement). Plus we get to look at the Empire from a subjected peoples view with one of the characters being an Etruscan warrior.
From Rome we travel across the empire to Parthia and beyond with Kane able to deliver the scene from our hero's view point very well.
Sometimes in the writing we encounter a little difficulty and have to suspend belief. we are also asked as readers to
believe in truth
sayers and the ability to predict the future, but Kane prepares you well and it is not a difficult choice to make.
Ben Kane has written a book that has the appeal of
Scarrow combined with the storytelling of
Mallinson &
Cornwell. Highly recommended & I can't wait to get hold of the next book "The Silver Eagle".